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Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
Following is a link to my Halloween poem entitled: Whole World Hidden - Comments appreciated. -- Thanks!
http://www.associatedcontent.com/articl ... _poem.html
http://www.associatedcontent.com/articl ... _poem.html
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
GREAT poem. One of the best Halloween poems I've read, and I've read a lot.
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
Well thank you very much. That's about the nicest compliment I could have hoped for.
Happy Halloween!
Ben
Happy Halloween!
Ben
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
You kiddin' Me...?
That was fantastic!
That was fantastic!
All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
That poem was very entertaining. I love to read independent writers works and that was quite a piece of art. Loved it.
Last night 'twas witching Hallowe'en
Dearest; an apple russet- brown
I pared, and thrice above my crown
Whirled the long skin; they watched in keen;
I flung it far; they laughed and cried me shame
Dearest, there lay the letter of your name!
Dearest; an apple russet- brown
I pared, and thrice above my crown
Whirled the long skin; they watched in keen;
I flung it far; they laughed and cried me shame
Dearest, there lay the letter of your name!
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
wow that was awesome you're a great writer
You're a great friend but if the zombies chase us i'm tripping you
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.
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Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem
Thanks again, everyone for your comments. It's good to get feedback and even better when it's positive.
Happy Halloween!
Happy Halloween!